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Stage 1

1/2H - Mrs Hambley

English

Learning Intention: To create simple texts that retell stories and provide information.

I am successful when I can:

  • Use a variety of planning strategies and tools for creating texts
  • Use nouns and their pronouns correctly
  • Use prepositional phrases to add information about how, when or where.

Sienna used a storyboard to plan her retell of the text ‘Banjo and Ruby Red’.

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Adira brainstormed to plan her writing about her favourite place.

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Karly used a mind map to plan her informative shark text. 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Lydia identified how she used pronouns correctly when composing her retell. 

 

 

 

 

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Aleeza used prepositional phrases to add detail to her informative shark text. 

 

 

 

 

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Alex shared how sharks could be represented in different ways in different texts.  She created a T-Chart listing how sharks are represented in imagined and informative texts.