For the Love of Literature
VCE Literature Unit 2 Creative Response
For the Love of Literature
VCE Literature Unit 2 Creative Response
Stephen Milligan
Teacher - VCE Literature
Ella studied a range of poems this year that culminated in the study of the collection Opened Ground by Seamus Heaney. Ella used pathetic fallacy, symbolism, enjambment and sibilance, among many other devices she learned this year, to great effect in her poem.
Ella found Heaney’s postcolonial and feminist critique of Irish and British society rich for a creative response and constructed her own poem that explored her female Asian identity. Ella explains her poem below.
Ella Davis
Year 11
I was influenced by all of the poems we studied but particularly Act of Union, Punishment and Limbo. Analogously, these pieces depict objectification and attraction as an act of violence or violation, due to the power dynamics and privilege inherent to colonialism and history. My poem reflects multiple different contexts. Firstly, there is an allusion to the ‘steeped’ tea, ‘silk’ and ‘sugar’ - key exports from China, which in some ways, cemented the value of the country in the eyes of some.
There is also a reference to ‘opiate pleasures’, denoting not only the sexual exploitation of the Chinese in various points throughout history, but also the British use of opium throughout China’s multiple Opium Wars. Finally, the allusions to ‘policies’ and ‘prophecies’ culminate in the overt reference to the White Australia Policy, quoting a section of Former Prime Minister John Curtain saying "This country shall remain forever the home of the descendants of those people who came here in peace in order to establish in the South Seas an outpost of the British race”. In this way, my poem responds to a broader context of racism whilst also placing a macro focus on the relationship between these two figures, who I believe could exist in almost any period of history: their relationship or those like it are ubiquitous, and most importantly, could happen today. Thus, perhaps it is most insightful to conceptualise my poem as set in the present.
The gushing riverside snakes
Around the prison where
My affliction has blossomed.
The cries of its water pierce the night,
The scent of silk and sugar permeates
The pergola wherein we share
Our wretched history.
Your veins are a twine of
Jade and gold that weave
My unbridled tapestry.
Your almond eyes sigh at me
Whispering stories of silence
And statutory submissiveness.
Dragon Lady, Madame Butterfly,
I dwarf your petite frame
And dominate your existence.
Magnolia, lotus, jasmine flower,
I crush you between my fists
As your intoxicating perfume
Leaks into the night air.
An outcast on the outpost
Of the British race,
Your back is marred with
Scrawled writing and ruin.
Foreign fruit, escaper of policies
And prophecies,
My ancestors decried your being
And desecrated your ferny soil.
My legacy is the voyeur
Of your sanctified destruction.
My steeped, opiate pleasures
And your glimmering pain.
Ella Davis