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Miss Mc Coy's Grade 4

Here are some writing samples from across the term since we went back into Remote Learning. We have used Alliteration to write silly stories and poetry to create spells.

Alliteration Work

Casey the chameleon caught the cool cookies then saw Charlee chasing creepy cherries chasing Casey the chameleon. – Cassin Cook.

Hungry Hawk hunts hotdog hoarders. Hungry hawk hates hotdog hoarders for hotdog hoarders hoard hotdogs. Hungry hawk has no hotdogs to hoard. Hungry hawk happens to have found humongous hotdogs. Harry hates humongous hotdogs. So hungry hawk hoards humongous hotdogs. – Hugo Turnbull

At an African aquarium an aqua anaconda allowed Ava and Ally to enter aqua anaconda’s aquarium. But allowing Ava and Ally at noon alarmed aqua anaconda an eye at aqua anaconda’s allowance. – Ava Giles

Super Sophie slithers suddenly, surrounding sparkly sapphires. – Sophie Crawford

Poetry

Come on kids let’s get rid of the witch 

We will make spell to make her itch.

Plip and plop into the pot.

It will boil and bubble it’s very hot.

We will add a very big toad’s leg.

We will also add a poisonous egg.

We will add a long arm.

Then we will do a charm.

Evie Pogue

For this spell to work, you’ll need an egg

And crack it on a burble’s leg,

Then you’ll need to grill it quick

Or else you’ll end up with a trick!

You also need a slice of toast,

Spread some jam on, if you wish to boast.

Sprinkle on some fried cake,

That’ll make the witch ache!

Roll it all in a ball

And roll it all down your hall 

The witch will grab it, 

Which will spawn a rabbit!

The rabbit will kill all of them, 

So, happy ending!

Lila Brown

Have you ever had a horrible itch,

To get rid of a mean old witch,

To kill a witch, 

There is one simple trick,

If you make a potion that will make a witch sick,

When it happens you will say, 

This is the end, my mean old friend,

To make this potion work first you must, 

Go down to the river,

And get a fish liver,

It's only fair,

To boil it and sprinkle it with a pinch of dogs hare,

Boil it and foil it,

And chop it to pieces a bit,

You take a toasted cow leg, 

And boil some burble eggs,

You take your dog hair fish liver,

And your boiled burble eggs,

Put it all in a big saucepan along with the toasted cow leg,

Cook it and grill it,

Toast it and fill it,

Slice it and boil it until it is a big soup, 

this doesn’t just work on one witch but a big group,

Put it in the refrigerator,

Soon the nasty old witch will be saying see you later,

When it’s cold,

And it's been rolled,

Add a crack of cat prancer fat,

That’ll ought to get the actual witch brat,

Then she will feel,

Like she’s swallowed an eel,

She will burn from the insides hot, 

And feel like she has been shot,

She will burst into flames, 

And that will be the end of her days.

Hugo Turnbull

If you want to stay alive 

You have to destroy the witches hive

All you need is 5 cat legs

And a big old handful emu eggs

Mix all this in a pot

Then all the witches will be left to rot

Lara Sawyer

Grade 56

Dad

Humorous, lovely

Caring, motivating, loving

He is who I look up to

Best Friend - Elyse

Blanket

Warm, fluffy

Comforting, snuggling, wrapping

Makes me feel warm

Cover – Emily

Scooters

Fun, metal

 Jumping, tricking, crashing 

Fun at the skatepark 

Scooters! – Ben

Tree

Tall, Shade

Swaying, Rustling, Whooshing

Happy, Cool, Calm, Relaxed

Eucalyptus  - Erin

Dogs

Fluffy, loyal

Caring, loving, helping

Makes people feel happy.

Friend – Ethan

Gran

Creative,Inventive

Baking,SeWING,LOVING

MY BEST LIFE LESSONS

nAnA – Eve

Football

Entertaining, Fascinating

Kicking, Passing, Running

Our nation's great game 

AFL – Eve

Lockdown

Boring depressing

Home learning exploring bike riding

Can’t wait till it ends

Iso – Hamish

Spring

colourful, renewed

Calming, refreshing, renewing

A new, lively world

Pollen – Lachy C

Snakes,

Poisonous, dangerous,

Slithering, stalking, sliding,

Hunting for their prey,

                                                            Reptiles – Lachy H

Dog

Playful and cute

Playing, running and barking

Fluffy and so soft like a blanket

Love is a four legged word – Lia

Spring

Warm, beautiful

Camping, blooming, shining 

Happy, smile, delightful, peaceful 

Season – Lucy

                               Mum                                                                          Dad

                    Careful, brave                                                           daring, brave 

            Caring, loving, worrying                                          daring,caring loving        

     Mums are caring brave and loving                     dads are fun brave and exciting 

                         Mother    - Luke C                                            Father  - Luke C

Flowers

Bright beautiful

Sowing flowing glooming

Flowers make me feel brighter

Blossoms – Nyla

Friend

Nice, funny

Loving, annoying, caring,

They’re a friendly person,

Mate – Nic

Snakes

Shiny,Silent

Sneaky,Talented,Predator

Good at hunting food.

Snakes - Patrick

Lambs

Woolly, white

Chasing, jumping, playing

Joyful, sweet, happy, warm

Baby sheep  - Seb

Daddy

Big, loving, helpful,

Funny, sweet, caring, wise

A special person to me

Family. – Tiarna

Cars

Loud Expansive 

Zooming Carrying revving

Cars are very helpful

Vehicles – Tyler A

Dad

Fun, hard working

Loving, caring, enjoying

Happy, great, grateful, upbeat

Dad! – Tyson J