Some examples of persuasive writing from the 5/6 class

Dear mr ryan.I think we should get…A STUDENT LOUNGE!,I personally think it would be a good idea. Kids year prep to year 12 only.

For example ,kids would go in at break and relax,talk,and eat.

In the lounge we would have couches,sink,table/chairs ,microwave if kids bring noodles or something that need microwaving . We need a sign that says”Kids lounge {No adults!}” we also need a sandwich press,a toaster, a fridge,Milo maker,Speaker,music,dancing,karaoke machine,gymnastics equipment in the lounge,

There will 2-3 parts in the lounge the kitchen,lounge room thing,study room/quiet room(example: kitchen:

lounge:

quiet room:

.

Also I think it’s a fair idea since the teachers get a lounge and not students🤔.

We also need something rare for the lounge so I was thinking a guard dog who doesn’t let anyone over 12th grade in(named bolt st mary.)we also need PUPPYS because who doesn’t love puppys!!!!

Tannah

NO HOMEWORK!

I personally think that no homework is way better than having to do homework. It is just a waste of time! I could be playing on the trampoline but instead I’m doing stupid homework.

I feel as though we do enough work at school, ending school days to then go home and have to do more school work is silly. It is just inconsiderate because we are at school for six hours, five days a week. Teachers expecting students to complete more work outside of school hours is ridiculous.

Therefore, if we didn’t have to do homework we would have much more time to relax and do activities that help us create a wider variety of knowledge about life.

On the other hand, homework after school is not that bad. If you quickly do it, you get to do what you wanted to do afterwards.

If you don’t do homework you don’t get to do what you wanted to do. So I would do homework after school then do what you want to do.👍

P.s i know why teachers give us homework because we learn a variety of different things in math and English and to remember what we learnt in class.

For revision

Pippa

This is why we should get a Gaga pit

Dear Mr Ryan

Gaga ball is sooooooooo much fun. I think kids will like it.

In my opinion the Gaga ball is a game for all ages. It doesn’t matter if you’re 11 or 7. Everyone would enjoy playing it.

I think ESOs and teachers can play too. It would be soooooo cool to have them play with us. I played it at camp and I enjoyed it so much. It was so fun. Why Gaga ball is fun it’s because there is Bailey and rules and is easy to learn for all ages.

And These are some reasons we should get it.

1: It will help us get fit. And help us with are

Health. And we will get really strong 💪. And I strongly believe that most of the kids would like to play gaga ball.

2: As you can see my whole class agrees that we should get a gaga pit. My whole class loves Gaga ball.

3: All of the kids are getting bored. And the kids think that it is unfair how we don’t get sports equipment because other people leave it out.

4: and he won’t leave people out anyone can play and it’s also safe for everyone you can’t get hurt how good that you don’t gotta do paperwork🤗🤩.

But anyway we all will be so happy if you just have a look at this please just think about it and please get a Gaga pit.

Look on the back to see where we should put the Gaga pit 🤩🤩🤗🤗

by Sophie

Prayers and Acknowledgments

Thought Of The Week

Value Of The Week

Oliver Walker

Liam Jarrett

Isaac Perry