Years 3/4

Narrative Writing

Year 3/4 students have started looking at Narrative Writing. We have discussed the importance of following the structure and we realised how planning out our ideas is super helpful when it comes to our writing. We planned out our first narratives by breaking up our ideas into five parts: Orientation, Build Up, Problem, Resolution and Ending. We then used these five parts to help us structure our writing into clear paragraphs. Over the next few weeks, we will share some of our narratives with you. Here are Cooper's and Jaxson's.

The Most Dangerous Thing by Cooper Leese

In 2022 there was an old famous bike rider. He lived alone and Bob Leese is turning 90 today. He is heading on a trip around Australia. 

It takes a month to get half way around and Bob Leese stopped at the fuel station to get fuel. SUDDENLY bisons started to charge at him. He hopped onto his motorbike and went on the speed limit. Then zombies started to chase him. 

Somehow a bison rams at Bob Leese and stabs him but he is a half way around Australia. What is he going to do?

Hunters arrived and shot 1000 bullets at the bisons and zombies. Luckily they take Bob to the hospital. 

Bob Leese goes home and gets really better but when he turned 104 Bob Leese died. 

The Great Moo Man By Nate Weilbaecher

On one stormy night there was a Moo Man who is 200,000,000,000,000 years old.

He has 2,222 children and they’re all twins and he lives in Moo York where Moo Spider and Moo Goblin live too and they’re fighting right now.

 Moo Goblin won and pierced Moo Spider to death. The Great Moo Man stepped up and the Great Moo Man was born.

The Moo Goblin is back so the Great Moo Man violently murders the Moo Goblin.

The Grate Moo Man won. The Moo Man lived happily after. 

The Ultimate Bank Robbery by Jaxson Cross

It's Tom Holland. He's working on a very big project. I love New York today. It's my 26th birthday. I'm the world's most smartest man! My enemy is the Green Goblin. I hate him.

There's a bank robbery in progress. It's the Green Goblin. He has a knife mini gun. I'm going in! I've got to stop the Green Goblin. 

He's driving away with the million dollars. Oh no! He's got the money. I've got to stop the Green Goblin quickly. 

I swing onto the Green Goblin's tank.  take off the very heavy missile. I've got the money off the Green Goblin. 

Spider Man returned the money back to the back. Spider Man is a very good avenger.